I have a big project recently in English class. It's about the freedom of the water. So I decided to work with scott. We plan to do some posters about the disadvantages of bottled water and advise people abandon drinking bottled water. If they support our project they can sign their name at the bottom of the posters. I decided to research about how to motivate people to make changes. I think it's the key to if the project will succeed.
I'm excited. Because I can learn a new important skill and actually can help some people to change in a good way! It's a meaningful project I think.
Friday, February 21, 2014
Friday, February 14, 2014
The importance of writing
Writing
Nowadays, as the development of technology, more and more people use E-mail and messages to replace writing. But you may not realize that how important the writing is. Actually, writing relates to most of the professions.
For example, being an architect is always my ideal professions. It seems that you don't need to have great writing skills to be a success architect. In fact, they relates to each other tighter than you think. Have a great handwriting can give your employers a very good impression. A person who has strong writing skills often let others think he/she is a trustable, reliable and carefully person. The power of writing is strong. A good architect should be both creative and carefully.
Why don't you spend some time practicing writing. It's really helpful to your profession career.
Nowadays, as the development of technology, more and more people use E-mail and messages to replace writing. But you may not realize that how important the writing is. Actually, writing relates to most of the professions.
For example, being an architect is always my ideal professions. It seems that you don't need to have great writing skills to be a success architect. In fact, they relates to each other tighter than you think. Have a great handwriting can give your employers a very good impression. A person who has strong writing skills often let others think he/she is a trustable, reliable and carefully person. The power of writing is strong. A good architect should be both creative and carefully.
Why don't you spend some time practicing writing. It's really helpful to your profession career.
Monday, February 10, 2014
An experience of English class
Today in English class, Ms.Bacon ask everyone to write a letter to someone who advertise for bottled water. I think this assignment is very different from any others. You need to advise a specific person for a specific thing. It's a kind of difficult for me. Actually I'm not good at advise others. So this assignment took me a long time. I think it's also a good experience for me to learn how to write a letter and how to advise others.
This is the letter that I wrote to Jennifer Aniston.
Shawn jiang
415 Longcross CT.
Suwannee GA 30024
Jiang.tingxiang@aaa.edu
Jennifer Aniston
4321 First Street
Anytown, State ZIP
Dear Jennifer
I knew you have been a spokesperson for Glaceau’s Smart Water since 2007. But the product you advertise for-------bottled water which is not as good as you think. In fact, all bottled water is bad.
First of all, those ad is misleading all of us. These photos shown on the ad is not the source of Smart water. Actually much of the bottled water is from urban tap water.
Second reason is that these products are too expensive for most of people to buy. It's a need instead of a want. It's not someone's property. It's a precious natural gift.
,Last but not least, plastic bottles can cause serious environmental issue. Those recyclable bottles actually can't be recycle. They hurts the environment badly.
Therefore, it's a bad idea to be a spokesperson for bottled water advertises. My advice is that you should stop advertising for bottled water because bottled water hurts the environment and it's just expensive tap water.
Sincerely yours,
Shawn Jiang
This is the letter that I wrote to Jennifer Aniston.
Shawn jiang
415 Longcross CT.
Suwannee GA 30024
Jiang.tingxiang@aaa.edu
Jennifer Aniston
4321 First Street
Anytown, State ZIP
Dear Jennifer
I knew you have been a spokesperson for Glaceau’s Smart Water since 2007. But the product you advertise for-------bottled water which is not as good as you think. In fact, all bottled water is bad.
First of all, those ad is misleading all of us. These photos shown on the ad is not the source of Smart water. Actually much of the bottled water is from urban tap water.
Second reason is that these products are too expensive for most of people to buy. It's a need instead of a want. It's not someone's property. It's a precious natural gift.
,Last but not least, plastic bottles can cause serious environmental issue. Those recyclable bottles actually can't be recycle. They hurts the environment badly.
Therefore, it's a bad idea to be a spokesperson for bottled water advertises. My advice is that you should stop advertising for bottled water because bottled water hurts the environment and it's just expensive tap water.
Sincerely yours,
Shawn Jiang
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