Monday, February 10, 2014

An experience of English class

         Today in English class, Ms.Bacon ask everyone to write a letter to someone who advertise for bottled water. I think this assignment is very different from any others. You need to advise a specific person for a specific thing. It's a kind of difficult for me. Actually I'm not good at advise others. So this assignment took me a long time. I think it's also a good experience for me to learn how to write a letter and how to advise others.
         This is the letter that I wrote to Jennifer Aniston.
 

Shawn jiang
415 Longcross CT.
Suwannee GA 30024
Jiang.tingxiang@aaa.edu

Jennifer Aniston
4321 First Street
Anytown, State ZIP

Dear Jennifer
           I knew you have been a spokesperson for Glaceau’s Smart Water since 2007. But the product you advertise for-------bottled water which is not as good as you think. In fact, all bottled water is bad.
          First of all, those ad is misleading all of us. These photos shown on the ad is not the source of Smart water. Actually much of the bottled water is from urban tap water.
         Second reason is that these products are too expensive for most of people to buy. It's a need instead of a want. It's not someone's  property. It's a precious natural gift.      
        ,Last but not least, plastic bottles can cause serious environmental issue. Those recyclable bottles actually can't be recycle. They hurts the environment badly.
        Therefore, it's a bad idea to be a spokesperson for bottled water advertises. My advice is that you should stop advertising for bottled water because bottled water hurts the environment and it's just expensive tap water.
Sincerely yours,

Shawn Jiang

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